Last Plane Out

Upmarket Thriller | 91,000 words | Complete
Setting: Fly-in Alaskan Village
Status: Querying


Madeline Maddox, 31, takes a one-year “reset” job teaching grades 7–12 in a place that watches newcomers like freight. The position is tied to the Teacher Housing + Retention Grant left behind by Kaya Nungak, a beloved local teacher who died suddenly. On Madeline’s first night in the drafty teacher unit, she finds Kaya’s hidden folders: grant checklists, housing complaints, and a line item for safety gear that never arrived. Tucked inside is one sentence that reads less like grief than a warning: If anything happens, don’t let them call it “weather.”

Madeline assumes Kaya was documenting bureaucratic negligence until “Uncle,” the village gatekeeper, starts closing in with friendly pressure and an insistence on controlling the story. He knows who gets fuel, who gets freight, who gets on a plane, and who waits. Then a student is crushed while loading fuel drums and the clinic calls for a medevac. The sky is clear. The runway sits under calm light. Still, the answer comes back: “weather.” The medevac never arrives. By nightfall, Uncle is in the cafeteria telling everyone what to believe, handing out a ready-made explanation, and Madeline realizes Kaya’s warning was literal.

Now Madeline has Kaya’s records, her own observations, and a growing certainty that the villain is not just a man, but the system he runs. When a student witness is quietly moved out of her reach as flight windows narrow, Madeline has a choice: stay quiet and keep her job, her housing, and her safest path out, or push back and risk being isolated, discredited, and left behind in a place where Uncle controls the last plane out.

EXCERPT

The prop plane skimmed low over tundra and shallow water, its vibration still in Madeline’s bones. From her window seat the village looked dropped on purpose and forgotten: a strip of gravel, a few metal roofs, fuel tanks flashing late-summer light like a warning.

Madeline kept her face neutral when the tires hit hard. She was used to hard landings, just not in planes. In Montana, hard meant boots, pack weight, and a teenager trying to set a forest fire with a lighter they swore they didn’t have.

She was thirty-one, an age when most of her college friends were arguing over mortgage rates and preschool waitlists. Her own life was still measured in gear and stamina. A decade of seasonal work for the Park Service and leading wilderness therapy treks had left her steady under pressure and broke in quieter ways, with a bank account that didn’t have enough zeros to buy a used truck without wincing.

All the way from Anchorage she’d told herself the same thing: this was a job. A year. A reset. Enough money to stop living out of bunkhouses.

When the propellers wound down, the cabin didn’t go quiet, it only changed pitch. She pulled off the foam headphones the pilot had insisted on and heard freight settling behind her: boxes strapped down with netting, a cooler someone had labeled in marker, supplies that belonged to people she hadn’t met yet.

She was the only passenger. Everything else on the plane had been ordered.

The door opened and the cold hit like somebody had flung it at them. Not winter cold. Not yet. But the kind of air that makes you think about whether your coat is enough.

She stepped down onto the gravel with her duffel and her backpack and immediately understood the first rule of this place.

Everyone could see you.